Friday, September 3, 2010

Gudiyaa

He inserted the coin, and then put one more tick mark against the piggy-bank. He counted to confirm. The marks added up to Rs. 40.

This is the amount he required so that he could buy the Gudiyaa that he wanted. He had seen the Gudiyaa in Ram-Lakhan Stores display pane. Since he did not get pocket money from his parents like his friends, he had to cut on his expenses. He walked sometimes to home to save the bus ticket, made books out of old paper to save on stationary, put 50 paise instead of a rupee in the Shiv-mandir hundi. But he did not mind all this at all. He wanted the Gudiyaa. So, he broke open the piggy-bank, and counted the money again. It was accurate. Enthusiastic and overjoyed, he ran to the stores. He showed the money and demanded, "Give me the Gudiyaa......"

The Shopkeeper replied, "You are too late. The last one sold out yesterday evening".

He travelled back to his home by bus.........

5 comments:

  1. d story does make sense...but thn y wud a small boy save money 4 a gudiyaa??i feel u shud b chnging d gender...instead of a small boy make it a girl...wich wud make sm sense 2 d reader atleast....or else it wud b fine if d small boy s saving mny 2 gift a gudiya 2 his sis if hes hvin one or else 2 sm1 he bothers bout a lottt...dat wud really make sense dude....think oer it...:)

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  2. Well, If you are a frequent reader, you would search for deeper meanings.... wont you ??

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  3. a blogger shudnt b blogging keeping in mind his frequent readers....a 1st time reader also shud b able 2 undrstnd ur blog.....

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  4. Yeah, True.... thats why I have described my blog, in the About me section !

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  5. What is the message that you had in mind when you wrote this?
    After all the efforts the little clad puts in, he does not get what he wants. So do you mean that one does not always get what one wants or do you mean that success in achieving your goals depends on both time and efforts.

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